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great piece! I like that the bot can talk – an interesting idea that the machine is checking to make sure he’s ok.
Thanks! Glad you approve 🙂
“A lump began to form in my throat.”
Like that line a lot, just the right amount of emotion to make me empathize and try to imagine what it might be like, to look out on a dead city :). Nice story!
Thanks! That line was a fairly last-minute addition, as I recall. Glad you liked it 🙂
Great description skills – I certainly felt the words. I wanted to read more and get into the story.
Thank you :). I actually wouldn’t mind expanding this out a little some day, come to think of it.
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