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Scifriday – Ruin

March 24, 2014

Blanked for now; will explain later 🙂

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8 Comments
  1. great piece! I like that the bot can talk – an interesting idea that the machine is checking to make sure he’s ok.

  2. “A lump began to form in my throat.”

    Like that line a lot, just the right amount of emotion to make me empathize and try to imagine what it might be like, to look out on a dead city :). Nice story!

  3. Great description skills – I certainly felt the words. I wanted to read more and get into the story.

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